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Writing Competitive E-Mail
By Leslie O'Flahavan


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E-mail is a prized tool for the small entrepreneur. It allows you to communicate quickly and frequently with your customer. It doesn't matter that your competitor can afford a fancy logo and expensive stationery. E-mail puts you on an even footing.

Without graphics or engraving to enhance your message, what you say and how you say it matters more than in print communication.

But because e-mail is so easy to send, and because as a harried owner of a small business you feel pressured to respond immediately, you often dash off a response on the fly.

How many times have you clicked Send then remembered a couple of points you forgot to mention? Or did you send a rambling message, giving your client the task of sorting it out? Did you think your spelling didn't matter? After all, "It's only e-mail!"

It matters a lot. Your well-heeled competitor has the stature of his organization to back him up. His misspellings will be chalked up to "too busy to spell check."

Your misspellings and unorganized messages will call your competence into question. Does your inattention to spelling reflect a similar disregard for customer service? If your message is ill-conceived, can your product be any better?

When you write e-mail messages, remember your client will judge you by what you say and how you say it. Don't let your writing give customers a reason to turn to your competitor. Here are some guidelines to help you write e-mail like the Fortune 500 pros.

Think before you write. Before writing, jot down your main points or purpose. Decide what's most important and lead with that, in the first paragraph if possible. Don't leave important information for the second screen. Readers hate to scroll and might not get past the first screen.

Make the subject line informative. Forecast your main message by writing a subject line that announces what you are writing, such as a request or an announcement, and what about it, such as the purchase of new desk chairs or that there's a vacancy in the finance department.

Readers use the subject line to perform e-mail triage. A good subject line announces that it's relevant or urgent. A vague subject line invites the reader to ignore or delete the message.

Tell what action to take. Don't leave the reader wondering why you sent the e-mail and what you wanted. Convey the desired action clearly, boldly and early in the message.

Format for easy reading. Make paragraphs short; use vertical bulleted lists to condense information; and add white space for visual relief.

Narrowcast, don't broadcast. Resist the temptation to send copies to everyone. Define and narrow your audience to those who need the information. After receiving a few irrelevant e-mails, your client might not bother to read your important ones.

Check your tone. You might be tempted to tell your pesky client exactly how you feel. And it might make you feel better to write it. Just don't send your flaming message. Keep your tone cordial, businesslike, unbiased. Don't bad-mouth the competition. He's only a click away.

Proof before you click. Before sending, spell check and make sure you've punctuated properly. Have you remembered to include the attachment you promised?



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